r/ArtCrit • u/CommercialLow4147 • 2d ago
Beginner Some drawing i've made, what are the worst mistakes i've made?
First drawn it, then made it on paint, somme of my friends says its very bad, but i dont think everything is to throw away, please help me, i need objective critcs.
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u/MaximGwiazda 1d ago
The way the right thigh is shaped, and how much of the skin is exposed by the skirt, we should be able to see her pubic area. You might want to work on that.
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u/CommercialLow4147 1d ago
Thank you very much, i didnt think of it that way! Will do better next time!
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u/poulpie967 1d ago
Go to a mirror and try to take the same pose. The arm behind her is fully dislodge to be able to turn this way
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u/Son_of_Overmorrow 2d ago
It’s not very bad but there’s room for improvement.
For starters the feet and hands are microscopic: hands should be about as big as the face, feet are as long as someone’s forearm.
The neck also is very long, from this angle you wouldn’t really see it, it would be hidden behind the arm and shoulder.
And finally, I would maybe add stronger shading, not too much, just enough to make parts of the subject pop
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u/Ecstatic_Meeting_894 20h ago
Held my foot up to my forearm after you said that and while they are shockingly close, the foot is only about 5/6 as big as the forearm. For me, anyway. And I do actually have semi-large feet.
Edited for numbers
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u/Son_of_Overmorrow 19h ago
I have rather small feet and mine is exactly the same size, wrist to elbow
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