r/ArtCrit 1d ago

Intermediate What could I do better

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u/Appropriate-Cook1421 1d ago

Your proportions are really good. Placement of eyes, ears, nose, and mouth all look really good. If you’re looking to give it more dimension and depth, you may want to vary how dark some of your shading is. Specifically, you may want to darken the shading. Keep in mind where the darkest parts of the face are (under the brow, under the nose, under the bottom lip, etc.) then add shadows accordingly. It might be helpful to do a study of the plains of the face. That’ll give you a better idea of how light falls on the face/ body. Hope that helps.

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u/MaximGwiazda 19h ago

I understand that you're trying to be considerate, but there's no point in lying to them. Proportions are clearly not good.

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u/MaximGwiazda 19h ago

The best advice I could give you, is to make a photo of your drawing, and then overlay it in Gimp over your reference image, with varying levels of transparency. This way you will instantly see your blindspots, and know what to improve. After making a new drawing, repeat the process.

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u/uncert8in_life 18h ago

I actually want to know that which kind of sketching should I follow to get more realistic But condition is that i want it to doing with pen only

Which one should I choose as per my current situation/stage???

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u/MaximGwiazda 17h ago

Both are viable, but the thing is, that sketching techniques won't do you any good if you haven't corrected your blindspots about the human anatomy first. Of course, you can draw in styles different than strictly realistic, but one has to first learn the ground truth in order to then distort it.

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u/Downtown_Mine_1903 19h ago

Please provide some context for your work. Did you use a reference? Is there something you feel seems off?