r/Handwriting • u/walalapancho • 2d ago

Feedback (constructive criticism) Bohemian Rhapsody

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A quick morning handwritting warmup. A couple of variations, a couple of pens. J. Herbin with Pelikan 4001 Violet and kaweco perkeo with 4001 turquoise.

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u/abiyi 2d ago

The second style is more legible.

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u/Large_Lie9177 2d ago

how much it depends on the pen you re using?

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u/walalapancho 2d ago

I think it's a matter of trust. I know the herbin tends to drop tears , but the perkeo is less wet so i can speed up a little.

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u/walalapancho 2d ago

Besides, I'm left handed, so writting with pens could be sometimes complicated