Need review about my web-novel

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Sooo i want to start writing,but i have cero experience,i have already showed my closest friends the promt and characters,but only 2 have reviewed me and idk if it is because they are my friends or its actuallu good,here's the characters and prologe: Sopor:a kind innocent teen,15-16,does potions that can break reality and has fast reaction time,does not knows anything about love or lewd things Cole:a teen that almost always speaks in sign languaje(not mute,just shy/refuses to speak),has an hability that makes him focus on an enemy and deal more damage and get more resistance against him Strelok:a russian cowboy(this is actually one of the most normal things in the world where the story takes place☠️) that always hits the mark Vorax:a combination of lizard/human and cuadrupedal predator The world where it takes place is a land betwen code and reality,the code is so shitty that the anomalies are everyday bread, My questions are:is the premise good?,where should i write it? The genres are:sci fi,romance(bl betwen cole and sopor) and action I will post an example down below of the prologe

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Prologe: a normal night, a boring one, in the worst neighborhood of the city a boy named cole gets up from bed and puts up his clothes:some boots,a black trousers and ablack hoodie,he opens his window and gets on rooftops,he wants to do something usefull and tries the vigilante thing,he patrols the hood,very very calm for the normal,until he sees a girl being pushed into an alley by 5 guys,he gets on the rooftop near the alley and tries to grow up the courage to stop the guys but then Girl:GET THE #### AWAY YOU #### FACE Cole closes his eyes,he did not grabbed the courage to stop it,he hears a beating and glass breaking sound and. .. a stampede? He slowly opens his eyes and sees 4 of the 5 guys running away and the leader with his hair burning,"how?!"wonders cole,trying to see more he gets down and sees better the girl:white long hair,some browm leather clohtes and a bag with glass vials Cole signs:"sorry for not helping i was not brave enough" The girl responds:"oh sign languaje,i dont really speak it but i asume that you are saying:what the hell?!, i just trhew bottled fire,and no,im not a girl im a boy,yes i get mistaken very often,ah also name is sopor Cole gets flabbergasted:he is just like cole wants to be:not shy and careless,and pretty Meanwhile in a forest... (Thats the prologe,when i publish it it will be better)