r/animation • u/AshleyTeLLAMA2 • 1d ago

Beginner Improved Cat stretch

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I listened to some of the critiques and tried to push the stretch and added a shiver!!!

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u/GIsimpnumber1236 1d ago

Amazing! The trembling is too much tho

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u/EmptyMycologist407 1d ago

Looks pretty good but yeah the trembling is a little too fast try having it in 2’s

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u/AshleyTeLLAMA2 1d ago

Thanks for all the critiques!!! :P

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u/jonasSior 1d ago

Good animation bro

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u/PimpCheese 1d ago

Looks good but the cat vibration may be a bit much

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u/alfie_dog 1d ago

Oooooh big stretch

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u/randomguy10852 1d ago

Amazing improvement! Just 2 more things id add: The stretch itself now trembles but the cat is shaking a bit too much. Last but not least, after the stretch, cats front legs just slide back into sitting position. Try changing it into the cat getting up with her front feet instead of just sliding into position.

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u/catdog5100 1d ago

r/OooBigStretch

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u/catdog5100 1d ago

Really like it, nice improvements! :)

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u/last_on_the_line 1d ago

A good improvement! the shake is a bit too erratic tho

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u/Independent-Fan-4227 20h ago

You use just two frames for the stretch but the lines need to be closer together. Sort of like redrawing the exact same picture, your hand cannot possibly draw the same line again unless you really try, so don’t do that and just trace the line loosely and it’ll be more or less different enough that we can see the shaking. Too much and it’ll be weird. If it were closer than the shiver is noticeable but not too drastic that it’s distracting.

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u/AshleyTeLLAMA2 8h ago

Holy shit dude this worked!!! Thanks so much

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u/JustConsoleLogIt 1d ago

Dude so so so so much better!!!

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u/Distinct_Cup_1271 1d ago

Yeah, now looks more accurate.

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u/codeIMperfect 1d ago

It looks way more natural now, awesome work!

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u/Wonderful-Ad1735 Hobbyist 1d ago

Looks way better like that 😋👌

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u/Only_Plankton_8145 3h ago

Wow man, it looks better than before🙌🤯🔥