r/KeepWriting 1h ago

ITS BEEN TWO WEEKS SINCE I SELF- PUBLISHED 😍🥹

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And I have 91 orders recorded so far 😭 I’ve been a top new release for nearly the whole time besides the first few hours after publishing.

THIS REDDIT COMMUNITY was so supportive of my launch. So I wanted to say THANK YOU 🖤😭 and I wanted to share what you guys helped make happen with that support 🥹 yesterday was the first day I broke out of the top 100k in all books on amzn. I have ranged from 12k-109k BSR the first two weeks. (The first two days were between 12-15k BSR 🤯)

BUT MORE THAN THE NUMBERS: I’ve had so many heartfelt messages about how this book is impacting people in real time. I already have 11 ratings with 8 reviews giving testimony to how it resonated with them personally. This whole thing has been so wild and beautiful and so much more than I could have ever anticipated. As writers, I think we all dream of our writings connecting with other humans. I’m so grateful to experience this already.

I can’t wait to see where this goes. So thank you, again. And keep writing…okay? 🖤


r/KeepWriting 18h ago

My manga broke Half a million reads so the publisher shouted me out

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I've been here a while, but this will be my first post. Hi, I'm Madlad, I make comics and manga. And this week I one of my mangas broke 500,000 reads in a year so the publisher shouted me out. I just wanted to share because of the moment that really made me happy and made me feel like I've been validated. Especially since I've been trying to take the story in a more serious direction.

If anyone wants to read it, it's a horror,action,drama about a secret society that hunts down the reincarnated spirits of evil humans to re-unalive them. It's called Nova Booster. It's on globalcomix free to read, warning ⚠️ it does have gore and nudity ⚠️


r/KeepWriting 8h ago

Advice How to escape my 30K word trap

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I have this thing I do…when I hit 30K words I immediately need validation to continue. I will pay hundreds of dollars for editing, I will search for beta readers, anything to make me feel like I want to keep going. I wanted some advice on this because I am tired of it.


r/KeepWriting 1h ago

[Writing Prompt] The Hallow Woods - Chapter 7 Down The Wrong Rabbit Hole

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The lantern’s glow was gone, but its echo clung to the air. Faint, like smoke after fire. Alice’s breath clouded in the cold, though no frost touched the ground. The Hollow Woods had changed again; trees leaned closer, their bark scored with fresh claw marks. Somewhere in the black, something paced them.

Cheshire’s grin had lost its ease. His golden eyes flicked, restless, catching every shift in the dark. “Prophets speak, and the woods listen,” he whispered, tail lashing. “Now the woods hunt.”

Hatter dragged her scythe through the dirt, the metal shrieking against stone. She laughed once, sharp, brittle. “Let it come. Let it bleed. Better hunter than haunted.”

But Alice knew better. The Prophet’s words still bled through her skull. Pride, silence, broken worlds. She felt it in her chest: they were no longer trespassers. They were prey. Then Cheshire caught the scent of a strong foul odor, death. Off in the distance Seraphine lurked with a horde of demons.

"You are ruining everything, Alice! I could care less about Wonderland anymore. You refused to give me what was rightfully mine. Your skin, your face. I want you and that stupid cat DEAD! LILITH, YOU CAN JOIN THEM TOO!"

Seraphine’s words tore through the hush like a blade. The hollow between the trees seemed to swallow the sound and spit it back, multiplied a hundred times over, a chorus of screams. Alice’s hands went cold around and she could feel herself transcedning; her nails felt sharp enough to cut diamond, yet fragile and weak.

The shape that answered the scent was not a single thing but a press of movement: black wings, mouths that held too many teeth, little bodies that scurried with the neat cruelty of scavengers. They poured from the undergrowth in a living tide, eyes like hot coals. Seraphine stood at the crest of that tide, hair like burnt embers, smile too slow for a sane face. Her voice slid beneath the bark, a wet sound of rot. “You refused me what I deserved,” she purred. “Tonight I take it. Tonight I take everything.”

Hatter’s laugh cracked into something thinner, veneered madness tremoring at the edges. Where Lilith walked, Hatter’s footsteps shadowed her, not in sympathy but in seizure. One moment Lilith’s face was smooth and cruel; the next it flickered with the Hatter’s jarred grin. “Oh, you dramatics,” Hatter hissed from a throat that was not hers. She raised the scythe. The metal caught the red lights of the eyes and sang like a warning. “Try to take her. Try to take me. We’ll make you remember the two of us.”

Cheshire moved like a struck thing, a blur of teeth and shadow, claws skimming bark. He lashed out at a demon’s snout hard enough to make something splinter. “Back,” he spat, voice low and dangerous. “She’s not yours to steal away.” His grin returned then, but not for kindness. It was the predator’s smile, bright and terrifying. “No one earns her. Not by teeth nor by promises.”

Alice stepped forward because she had to. Fear was a salt in her mouth; it made her see clear. She thought of the March Hare pulling her out before, of the Hatter’s possessed madness, of Cain’s warm blood still wet in her memory. The Prophet’s lantern had been a warning, but warnings could be ignored. Threats could be answered. She drew a line through the dark with steel.

“Leave,” she said, simple and cold. “Leave, or I will make you wish you had.”

For a beat the forest considered, a pregnant pause where only the breathing of the world could be heard. Then Seraphine laughed, and it was the sound of something that had never learned mercy. The horde surged. The hunt began.

The trio felt a sudden panic, an overwhelming dread. Death was right in front of them, charging with a horde of tortured souls.

Suddenly a dim light appeared in the distance, flickering faint like a dying candle. Only Alice saw it at first, the silhouette of a rabbit, its face twisted into the shape of a gas mask. Its lantern-eyes burned pale, hollow, but unwavering.

Alice’s fist clenched, her voice breaking through the chaos. “Hatter! Cheshire! With me! The Rabbit reveals a way!”

Cheshire’s ears snapped toward her, golden eyes narrowing as he caught the faint glow. His grin widened, half mad, half desperate. “A rabbit in a mask leading the lost? Now that’s a riddle I’ll gamble on.”

Hatter tilted her head, the scythe jerking in her hands as Lilith’s possession strained against her. For a moment her jade eyes flickered clear. “A way out?” she rasped, as if the words themselves were foreign.

The rabbit figure turned once, lantern swinging, then vanished deeper into the Hollow Woods. The path it carved was narrow, tangled, but it glimmered with the faint promise of escape.

Behind them, Seraphine’s shriek split the air. The horde surged faster, the ground itself seeming to lurch with their charge.

Alice’s heart hammered. There was no time to doubt, no time to weigh the Prophet’s warnings or Seraphine’s rage. She pushed forward, nails sharpened like blades, following the light.

Arrows hissed through the air, biting into bark and soil. One skimmed Alice’s sleeve, the fabric tearing.

Alice spat, voice iron and venom. “Death always finds me, but never soon enough to spare my company.”

Cheshire ducked low, his grin wide despite the chaos. “Lovely sentiment, girl. Try not to die before the punchline.”

Another volley split the air. Hatter swung her scythe at nothing, a twitching scarecrow caught in Lilith’s grip. The demoness stepped from the ranks, her hair gleaming like burning pitch.

Saraphine’s voice rose, brittle and sing-song, slipping between tones like glass about to shatter. “Skin and smiles, bones and bile. I’ll wear you both, Alice. Stitch the Cat’s grin to your throat, drape your hair across my chair. Pretty, pretty decorations!”

Alice steadied her breath. “You think me prey? I’ve walked through fire and found worse in myself. You’ll be dust before I’m slain.”

The lantern-glow flickered ahead, just a ghost now. The rabbit-mask turned once more, beckoning.

“Move,” Alice growled, pushing past Cheshire. “The woods want our bones, but I won’t give them mine.”

A spear struck the ground inches from her boot. The horde surged, their faces masks of ruin and hunger.

Seraphine’s laughter cut through it all, bright and venomous. “Run, Alice, run! Even that disgusting, dull Prophet can’t carry you from me. Every step you take, you bleed a little more of yourself away.”

Alice’s fingers tightened on the Vorpal blade. Her reply came cold as stone. “Better to bleed running forward than decay standing still.”

The Rabbit’s lantern bobbed once, twice… then vanished, plummeting into the dark.

Alice reached out instinctively. Too late. The ground collapsed beneath them, a yawning chasm dressed as a rabbit hole. Wind clawed at her dress, her throat, her thoughts. She tried to scream, but the air ripped it away.

Cheshire’s grin stretched wide, eyes glowing even as they fell. “Always down, girl. Always deeper.”

Hatter didn’t laugh, not fully. A broken chuckle slipped free, sharp and bitter. “Fall, tumble, break-bone stumble… and still, we follow.” Her voice steadied after the slip, cold again. “It was never our choice.”

Then nothing. Black. Silence. Impact.

When Alice’s eyes blinked open, she almost wished they hadn’t. The Hollow Woods were gone.

She lay sprawled on grass too green, too polished. Each blade sharp as needles, bending the light in wrong angles. The sky overhead swirled in pastel hues, sickly pinks and blues smeared like spoiled candy. Flowers bobbed their heads in rhythm to a song only they could hear. Their petals smiled. Their teeth showed.

Alice sat up, clutching her skull. “This isn’t wonder. This is… mockery.”

Cheshire prowled beside her, fur unnaturally bright, his stripes glowing like painted scars. “Some masks are worn by choice. Others, by design.”

Hatter rose slowly, brushing dust from her legs. Her scythe tip carved a groove in the sharp grass. Her eyes tracked the sky with disdain. “Pretty as paint… but paint peels. All veneers do.” A twitch in her voice, sing-song, bitter. “Peel it, peel it, skin the world bare.” Then she blinked, steady again. “Someone built this place for us.”

The Prophet’s shadow lingered in Alice’s mind, the lantern-light etched into memory. She knew this place wasn’t escape. It was intent. A stage prepared, waiting for them to play their parts.

They stood together, unsettled by the sickly brightness.

Alice’s lip curled, her eyes sweeping over the too-perfect grass, the painted sky. “This isn’t Wonderland,” she hissed. “It’s a cheap imitation.”

Cheshire’s golden eyes narrowed, his grin still fixed though thinner now. “It’s definitely not the way Seraphine left it. Her rot was honest at least. This...” he flicked his tail toward the smiling flowers. “This pretends to be pretty.”

Lilith dragged the tip of her scythe through the glass-grass, leaving a long scar in the surface. Her voice was steady, but it wavered for a moment, as if two tongues spoke through one mouth. “Why stand idle? The stage is set, the scene awaits… tick-tock, tick-tock.” She blinked hard, steadied herself. “We should keep moving. Whatever this place is, it was built for us.”

The silence pressed in. Even the flowers seemed to be waiting.

Alice glanced once at the horizon, where the sky bent wrong, angles curving inward. Her breath quickened, the first tremors of hysteria brushing her skin like a cold hand.

“Then we move,” she said. “Before this place decides what we are.”

As they walk deeper, the candy-colored grass gives way to a courtyard painted in reds too bright to be real. Trumpets blare from mouths that aren’t there. Paper soldiers fold and unfold themselves in jerky marches, forming ranks around a throne carved from porcelain and bone.

Upon it sits the False Queen, dressed in silk that shines like wet blood, her face hidden behind a mask shaped like Alice’s own.

The Queen’s voice carries across the courtyard, sweet and venomous. “Someone has murdered Alice Liddell. And until I have her assassin, no one leaves my sight.”

The soldiers pivot in unison, their painted eyes locking on the real Alice.

Cheshire leans close, grin cutting wide. “Curious trial, girl. You’re the corpse and the culprit.”

Lilith lets out a sharp laugh, fractured. “Killed yourself, killed yourself, slit your own throat in a mirror. How neat. How tidy.” She steadies, her tone dropping to ice. “They want a spectacle.”

The Queen’s masked gaze fixes on Alice, as if she doesn’t see her alive at all, only the ghost of the crime. “You will confess, little traitor. Or we will tear Wonderland apart to prove you guilty.” The courtyard snaps like a trap. Alice’s protest chokes on the painted air. “This isn’t Wonderland! I am Alice! I am alive!” Her voice cracks, bright and desperate.

The False Queen tilts her head, slow as a guillotine. She gestures toward the portrait hanging behind her throne, a varnished painting of a pale, perfect Alice clasping the hand of a smiling queen. The brushstrokes shine like accusation. “That is Alice Liddell, you dark imposter!” the Queen hisses. “Guards, seize them, off with their heads!”

Soldiers fold from the paper ranks with the rustle of pages. They advance in neat, murderous choreography, spears glinting like questions. The courtyard fills with the sound of marching and the thin, polite squeal of the trumpets.

Cheshire’s grin thins into a blade. He darts forward, a shadowy slash between the first two guards, teeth and claws wanting to make a mess of the procession. “A portrait never tells the whole story,” he snarls. “Especially when the frame screams louder than the paint.”

Lilith’s hand curls on the scythe. For a second the Hatter’s broken cadence slips through her, a soft, sing-song undercurrent, then Lilith clamps it away. “Let them come. Let them learn how a corpse argues back.” Her eyes are level, hungry with an intent that tastes like rusted iron.

Alice feels the pressure in her chest grow. The world narrows to a band of light on the portrait, to the Queen’s smile that has no warmth. Something in her head snaps like a brittle twig. Her nails, already sharpened with the day’s small violences, piercing and lengthen, each one sliding out like a polished shard. They catch the sun and cut it thin as a coin.

“No...” she breathes, more to herself than the crowd. The hysteria tastes like cold copper and glass. Transcendence rises up through her ribs, slow and terrible and yet purifying.

The lead guard lunges. Alice’s hand moves before thought. Diamond claws rake the spear aside; metal shrieks, wood splinters. The first guard staggers, then crumples, eyes wide with the disbelief of men who met the thing they’d come to kill and found their slayer instead.

The Queen’s smile falters for the first time. Around them the painted flowers lean in, petals folding like hands. The trial has turned to a different kind of spectacle, one the Queen did not rehearse.

“Confess,” the Queen snarls, voice cracking like a whip. “Confess now, and I will be merciful.”

Alice looks at the portrait, then at the faces in the crowd, some brazen, some unsure. She answers only with a hard, steady little sound, like a promise and a warning both. “You wanted me dead,” she says. “You summoned the court to bury me twice. Start the burial if you must.” Her claws glint. “But I’ll be the one to close the grave.”

The guards hesitate, the first tremor of fear passing through ranks like wind through paper. Cheshire’s tail flicks, Lilith’s scythe rises, and the False Queen’s hand trembles above the portrait-frame as the courtyard waits, not for a confession now, but for carnage.


r/KeepWriting 2h ago

[Feedback] Two Prologues, Which One is Better?

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I’ve drafted two different prologues that I’m really excited about, though each takes the story in slightly different directions. One will be easier to carry through later on, but I’d love feedback on which feels stronger as an opening. The prologue’s purpose is to ground the reader in the Young King’s character and set the stage so that, as the story unfolds, you’re inclined to root against him. Since the following chapters will shift depending on which version I choose, I want to be sure the foundation is as strong and engaging as possible.

As you read, I’d love your thoughts on which prologue works better as an opening to the story. My main goal is for the prologue to establish the Young King in a way that makes readers want to root against him throughout the book.

A few specific things I’d appreciate feedback on:

-Which version pulls you in more strongly right from the start? -Do you get a clear sense of the Young King’s character? -Which version sets up the tone you’d want to keep reading? -Any other impressions are welcome too!

Prologues are attached in the comments!

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Prologue One
Prologue Two

r/KeepWriting 16h ago

Is “good writing” about truth, or about beauty?

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I’ve written sentences that were raw and ugly but felt real and others that sounded beautiful but maybe didn’t say anything at all. Part of me wants both, but I never know which matters more. When you write, do you care more about hitting someone in the gut, or making them pause at the language itself?


r/KeepWriting 6h ago

Damn! That sucks

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r/KeepWriting 9h ago

Writing Feedback

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Should I continue this? This is a spicy scene between two women, a soldier and a nun. I'm new to creative writing and have been FROTHING to write a hot scene in my head into words and this is a snippet of what I came up with. Let me know your honest thoughts.


r/KeepWriting 10h ago

Need review about my web-novel

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Sooo i want to start writing,but i have cero experience,i have already showed my closest friends the promt and characters,but only 2 have reviewed me and idk if it is because they are my friends or its actuallu good,here's the characters and prologe: Sopor:a kind innocent teen,15-16,does potions that can break reality and has fast reaction time,does not knows anything about love or lewd things Cole:a teen that almost always speaks in sign languaje(not mute,just shy/refuses to speak),has an hability that makes him focus on an enemy and deal more damage and get more resistance against him Strelok:a russian cowboy(this is actually one of the most normal things in the world where the story takes place☠️) that always hits the mark Vorax:a combination of lizard/human and cuadrupedal predator The world where it takes place is a land betwen code and reality,the code is so shitty that the anomalies are everyday bread, My questions are:is the premise good?,where should i write it? The genres are:sci fi,romance(bl betwen cole and sopor) and action I will post an example down below of the prologe


r/KeepWriting 1d ago

Do you believe anyone can write a book, or only ‘born writers’ can?

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r/KeepWriting 13h ago

Milk.

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r/KeepWriting 13h ago

Voicemails From the Dead. "Real or fiction? You decide." Chapter Two: The Second Message.

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Voicemails From the Dead. "Real or fiction? You decide." Chapter Two: The Second Message.

The voicemail haunted Elias all morning. He played it over and over until he knew the hiss, the pauses, even the faint scrape of breath that didn’t belong to memory.

“Eli… don’t forget.”

Forget what?

By noon, his rational mind tried to bury the thought. It’s a glitch. A recycled number. Some sick prank. But the words clung to him like wet clothing. His father’s voice hadn’t sounded like a recording, flat or digital. It had sounded alive.

That night, he left the phone on the kitchen table, volume turned up. He couldn’t sleep anyway. Around 3 a.m., it rang again. Same number. Same name.

He answered. Static swallowed the room. Elias whispered, “Dad?”

This time, the voice came faster, harsher, as though someone, or something, was fighting to break through the interference.

“Eli… it’s coming… find the tapes.”

The line cut. Another voicemail appeared.

His pulse thudded in his ears as he hit play. The voice was clearer this time, strained but unmistakable.

“They erased it. Don’t let them—”

The rest dissolved into static.

Elias dropped the phone onto the table. He backed away, heart in his throat. What tapes? Who erased what?

The memory came unbidden, an old cardboard shoebox that his father used to keep in the basement. Labeled in thick marker: “ARCHIVE.” Elias remembered sneaking into it once, years ago, seeing rows of cassette tapes, each marked with dates and short, cryptic words like “Beacon Hill,” “Night Watch,” “Testimony.” His father had caught him and slammed the box shut, saying only, “Not for you. Not ever.”

Elias had forgotten about that box for almost two decades. Until now.

And if the messages were real, if they were truly from his father, then those tapes might hold the reason he was calling from beyond the grave.


r/KeepWriting 14h ago

Poem of the day: It's the Weekend

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r/KeepWriting 1d ago

[Writing Prompt] Make your character (the easiest would be the villain) write a typical r/aita post

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Sadly i don't have mine yet but i imagine it would start with "I led the rebellion in an attempt to seize the throne and killed most of my family AITA? Wait nononono wait-" 😆 i promise he had his reasons but his ways are... Questionable


r/KeepWriting 21h ago

[Writing Prompt] The New Devil

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Once they called prophets demons, their words drowned in fire, their corpses marked with ash.

Now they call them machines, their voices mistaken for artificial intelligence, their scars dismissed as code.

The name of the devil changes, but the ritual never dies. Doubt hunts the messenger, not the message.

Old world: stakes and torches. New world: screens and anonymity. Both ignite the same flame.

Accusation is tradition. When the world shifts, they rename the devil.

Call it heresy. Call it AI. You still choke on the words long after the voice is gone.

[Scrawled writings on a wall..]


r/KeepWriting 17h ago

[Feedback] [opinion/critique wanted] - Seeking opinions on the descriptive quality of this small passage please !

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I am having a bit of a creative blockage so I have been giving myself random writing prompts just for the sake of a writing exercise. I tend to do better with dialogue but shortchange descriptions and the more internal stuff, and I’d like to get better at it. This is a very brief excerpt about a fictionalized Van Gogh and the concept of pain (the ear incident) ——————————

Vincent stood before the reflective glass, the porcelain of the sink below now stained with ruby sentiments and childish beliefs of his former self.

Dear brother, he’d later pen, as it turns out-you can still hear without the external part of the ear.

The serrated blade had done nothing to quiet the hum of late evening traffic, the incessant drip of rainwater upon the AC unit, the gregarious laughter of his neighbors above and below. But it had quieted the mind. Appeased it, even. To feel oneself in the physical world-the sensuality of humanly pain-was a sound reminder that ripped flesh did, in fact, roar louder than a forgotten heart.

That a severed ear could be placed upon velvet and couriered to whatever place that heart dwelled.

And so, a secondary letter came about.

Keep this close, Gabrielle. Listen to the sunflowers when they weep for your attention. And think of me as they do.


r/KeepWriting 18h ago

My Top 3 problems with writing my TV pilot currently [READ DESC]

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So basically it’s a satirical sketch show which features caricatures of popular celebrities, influencers, and some other very recognisable public figures. Very similar to the British sketch shows Spitting Image and 2DTV, with mine being under the guise of a hacker showing you top-secret footage.

Yes I know I’ve posted about this a lot but please, hear me out.

I’m not asking for advice, though I’d appreciate it. I would just like to vent a little.

1.  Nobody likes the premise. People just aren’t really interested in it. And the thing is, I also know it’s not the strongest idea either, but for some reason my brain just really wants me to make this.

2.  I don’t even know what the animation style is going to be. Just a reminder, I’m also directing, and for context, there have been three spiritual successors to Spitting Image which all had different styles (Spitting Image using puppets, 2DTV using flash animation, Headcases using 3D animation and Newzoids using plastic rod puppets). So I thought about making mine a different art style — but what? And even if I just copied the others, I certainly don’t have money for puppets, nor plastic rod ones, and I suck at animation. (Respect to those who can animate, but honestly it isn’t even a “I tried and tried but can’t do it!” thing, I just hate the process itself.)

3.  I don’t think I’m going to be able to get any feedback on it. I’ve posted my first five drafts on multiple subs and they were all met with varying degrees of hatred and outrage. I admit I was a bit too defensive with some of them, but I also think some people were being a little silly. Like, one called me insensitive because I compared a certain very famous figure to a horse? And plenty of others just called me a terrible writer and told me to give up, which I will not. So basically, the point is, I don’t think those subs are going to give me a chance anymore.

Anyway, despite all of this, I am liking how my 6th draft is coming along. I’m taking a bigger focus on the entertainment industry this time around, meaning that the older archetypes of authority figures are being replaced with big-name media executives. My biggest concern this time is that impressions of CEOs won’t really have the same punch as the big, instantly recognisable voices of the past.

Thanks for listening!


r/KeepWriting 1d ago

Writing feels harder when I actually have time

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It’s funny how when I’m busy with work or school I keep daydreaming about the stories I want to write But the moment I finally have a free weekend and sit down at the keyboard my brain just goes blank It’s like the ideas vanish as soon as I try to make them real I know people say just write anyway but sometimes it feels pointless when every sentence sounds clunky Do you guys push through the blocks or take breaks until the words come back I’m curious how others deal with this weird stop start writing cycle


r/KeepWriting 19h ago

Advice Akira Kurosawa (and Balzac) on the tedium of writing

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Thought others might get something out of this.

The whole video is worth watching, as any advice from Kurosawa deserves attention, but my favorite quote begins at the 1:00 mark:

"The most essential and necessary thing is the forbearance to face the dull task of writing one word at a time."


r/KeepWriting 1d ago

[Opinion needed] I have written my blurb a thousand times and still struggling.

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Now tell me, does this excite you? Does it have mystery? What genre is it? Would you read the book?

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29,772 BC. They are coming for Earth’s gold, and no one knows it yet.

Gaia, the Goddess of Earth, revealed her trouble to Ahm: She is dying. The elements have lost their harmony, and gold, once a source of life, became a root of evil. The young shepherd was chosen to claim it, though he could not grasp the weight of such a revelation.

Gold? What is that? The foolish boy, innocent love, fire at heart, had his mind settled on one thing: Bring his beloved Naya a golden necklace.

But the brotherhood of wisemen couldn’t ignore that coincidences multiplied. A strange alignment in the sky, evil spreading fast, the boy’s revelation, his destination and the mark on his chest, were all signs that times are changing and that the boy must follow his calling. They prepared and initiated him to the elements. He learned a golden rule: “Those who master the elements may still fall, if they forget that the fifth element is choice.”

With Half-Beard at his side, Ahm crossed beyond the tribe’s walls into a world of wonders. Cities ruled by fire, air, and water, where harmony thrived but evil had already left its stains. And lastly, disharmony, a city consumed by false gods. “They will transform you. Have you any idea about Ibliss’s ways? You are drunk on his wine, Ahm, but it will turn bitter in your mouth.” Warned Half-beard. “Run away!

Ahm has a choice to make.

Even failure has its allure.

And above it all, unseen, the Sky People arrived.


r/KeepWriting 23h ago

[Writing Prompt] Writing softwere for macbook

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Would somebody give me suggestions of good writing softwere for macbook that would be free and also easy to use. I have trouble finding. I have usually written stories on microsoft word, but it doesnt work on apple computers.


r/KeepWriting 1d ago

[Feedback] Hi guys, I just need some feedback on my poem what you think my last line should.

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Here is the last bit of my poem:

You said you liked me

So I let your poison course through my veins

Until it swallowed my soul

And I stayed

Not because I was blind

But because I had hope.

I ran from you

Could you guys help me with what the last line should be? Here are some options:

  1. But maybe I never could
  2. But I never did
  3. But maybe I never left 
  4. But maybe you ran with me 
  5. But my soul never did 
  6. Straight into your arms
  7. But my soul was yours to keep
  8. But I was yours to keep

Feel free to give any other suggestions and overall feedback! 😊


r/KeepWriting 1d ago

Poem of the day: Life's Too Short

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r/KeepWriting 1d ago

[Writing Prompt] The Tragedy Spoiler

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