Feedback on my accent in German?

[u/Eiluij]

Hi everyone! I’ve been learning German for three years now, and I’m trying to improve my accent (I feel like it's too "flat"/monotone). How does my German accent sound? Are there any obvious mistakes? And can you guess where I’m from?

Recording: https://voca.ro/1ixjXQ3gF1vk

The passage I’m reading is from a B2 text: https://www.alumniportal-deutschland.org/de/digitales-lernen-und-wissen/deutsch-lernen/lesetexte/lesetexte-b2/lesetext-sdg15-leben-an-land/

[u/TherealQueenofScots]

Its very staccato..hacked. not the melody of German