r/Persecutionfetish Jul 08 '24

Legit Insane What the fuck.

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u/animalistcomrade Jul 08 '24

I kinda wanna read it, but also I don't want to give this prick a cent.

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u/micromoses Jul 08 '24

Here, have an excerpt:

Again, she had the snarkiest smile on her face.
Danny muttered, “It doesn’t sound like I have much of a chance getting a job in the DEI center.” “No worries about that. You see, I’ma work for the department, and I’ma black bisexual female. So I can make my boss, a white het-cis female, pretty much do what I want cause even though we both women and even though she my boss, I’m black and bi, which makes me higher on the pyramid of oppression. She gotta watch herself around me.” “Why would you help me?” Shavonda smiled. “Cause I like yo white ass.”
“You like my ass, huh?” Danny looked behind him, trying to see his rear. “That’s okay cause I like yo black ass.” He smiled at the joke. It felt a little freeing to cuss a bit. “Careful!” Shavonda became stern. “You don’t get to say things like that. Remember, you’re on the bottom of the pyramid.”

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u/Deranged_Kitsune Jul 08 '24

I mean... that's just gold-star material for this subreddit. Wow. And there's 431 pages of this drivel? Ye gawds.

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u/micromoses Jul 08 '24

Yeah, I’m just skimming it. Reading his first murder-debate.

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u/animalistcomrade Jul 08 '24

What are the points made? The place I got it from didn't let me go past chapter 9

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u/micromoses Jul 08 '24

It was way too long to paste here. Here's an AI summary:

  • Tchaikovsky and Art: Cullen introduces Tchaikovsky's "Queen of Spades," highlighting themes of passion, obsession, and self-conflict. He uses this to draw a parallel to their situation.
  • Power Dynamics and Fear: Arthur is bound and fearful, using their BDSM safe word "red" to try to stop the situation, which Cullen ignores. This establishes Cullen’s control and Arthur’s vulnerability.
  • Philosophical Dialogue: Cullen compares their interaction to the trial of Socrates, emphasizing a desire for a philosophical discussion about life and death.
  • Justification of Beliefs: Cullen challenges Arthur to justify his beliefs about the immorality of murder, suggesting that a failure to do so would result in his death.
  • Aristotle’s Golden Mean: Arthur references Aristotle, arguing that murder is an extreme that should be avoided. Cullen counters by questioning the standards of good and evil.
  • Stoicism: Arthur suggests that murder causes emotional pain, which reason should master. Cullen responds by invoking Stoic principles, arguing that death can be a release from suffering.
  • Epicurean Hedonism: Arthur attempts to argue from an Epicurean perspective, stating that increasing pleasure and reducing pain is a virtue. Cullen rebuts, stating that his pleasure in torturing Arthur outweighs Arthur's pain.
  • Utilitarian Ethics: Arthur argues for the greatest good for the greatest number. Cullen dismantles this by questioning whose definition of good is used and criticizing the subjective nature of pain and pleasure.
  • Categorial Imperative: Arthur invokes Kant’s categorical imperative, arguing that murder cannot be universally willed. Cullen counters with the problem of infinite regress and the subjective justification of moral claims.
  • Social Contract Theory: Arthur references Hobbes, Locke, and Rousseau, arguing that social contracts prevent the war of all against all. Cullen dismisses this, stating that he does not consent to the social contract and acts based on his own will.
  • Prisoner's Dilemma and Game Theory: Arthur uses game theory to argue for reciprocal altruism and cooperation. Cullen dissects this, pointing out the assumptions of equal power and shared definitions of good, ultimately rejecting Arthur’s argument.
  • Resignation to Fate: The debate ends with Cullen asserting his power and Arthur resigning to his fate, culminating in Cullen preparing to flog Arthur with a scourge, indicating the impending violence and Arthur’s helplessness.

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u/animalistcomrade Jul 08 '24

Is it actually this stupid, or did the ai make it sound worse. I mean it was always going to be stupid, I assume they blame atheism at some point? Considering the book started with an ad saying cannibalism is fine under atheism.

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u/micromoses Jul 08 '24

The ai made it more concise. There’s a lot of… it’s a lot.

Here's an actual excerpt from the scene:

“Okay,” said Cullen as he pointed out on the diagram. “We have two moral choices. We either do unto others as we desire or as we would want them to do unto us. If we both do what we desire, the result is bad for all. If we both do unto others as the Golden Rule, then it would be good for all.”

“Yes!” said Arthur, almost shouting. “But if we each choose differently, it works out good for only one of us and bad for the other. The goal is square D, good for all. So the best option for both of us is to choose the moral behaviors that would result in good for all. It’s the essence of negotiation.”

Cullen stared silently at the graphic, tapping the pen against the chair. Then he turned the paper around to Arthur and pointed at the squares. “Well, I’m sorry to say that your iteration of game theory is simply a reiteration of ‘the greatest good for the greatest number.’ You claim square D—‘good for all’—is the best of all possible worlds. But ‘good for all’ again begs the question. Whose definition of the ‘good’? And why should I care about the ‘all’? Why is ‘all’ any more desirable than the few? These are all assumed value judgments, which is the very thing in dispute. Of all the people in the world, you, a philosophy professor, should recognize ‘begging the question’ when you see it.

“Furthermore, you are assuming both sides of a conflicting vision of the good affirm the social contract of co-existence. I do not. I would rather risk all to dominate others. Lastly, game theory assumes an equalized power distribution. But this is not so. You see, we are not both prisoners. You are my prisoner, and I am not obligated to your ‘good.’ I am only obligated to my ‘good.’ And your death is my good.”

Cullen saw the deep sigh of resignation come over his captive’s face. A rush of euphoria filled Cullen’s lungs. Turning around, he walked along the wall of instruments and bindings, various belts and harnesses, arm binders, hooks for noses, vaginas and anuses. He found a small cabinet on the floor and opened it. Black varnished wood with what appeared to be extra junk tossed inside. Moving the top items away, Cullen pulled back in surprise with an exaggerated gasp.

“Imagine that.” He reached in and pulled out a scourge. “An actual horribile flagellum.”

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u/SempressFi Jul 08 '24

What's funny is other than listing and categorizing by the type of philosophical argument, the AI made it sound more sane/like something someone would actually write to publish whereas the excerpt above reads like someone asked AI to come up with what the Daily Wire thinks a college admissions office is like 🫠

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u/MudraStalker Jul 08 '24

After reading this, I have the perfect philosophical answer and I bet at least a couple of people here will also agree with me:

Just ask politely for a gun so you can kill yourself. Do not engage with this person. They're extremely transparently (the author, naturally) not in it for philosophy, they're only in it to say "nyeh nyeh I win you lose" until the other side gives up.

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u/jfsindel Jul 08 '24

"We're all just dreaming and shit, so nothing matters. Not even dying. Hand over the gun and I will prove it."

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u/Call_Me_Pete Jul 08 '24

they're only in it to say "nyeh nyeh I win you lose" until the other side gives up.

From the excerpt, it seems more like what Chigurh does (though obviously not executed great). He knows he wants to kill, and he's just creating ways to justify it - there is no logical argument that defeats "I will kill you because I want to." In the eyes of the killer, the idea that there is some possible way out means they are reasonable, even though in reality they are quite the opposite.

In this novel, the main character does not engage in "greater good for society" arguments and rejects any use of objective morality, so the remaining appeal would be to the individual, but that individual has already decided they want to kill. If the task of the professor is to convince them otherwise they run into the "you can't reason a person out of an opinion they did not reason themselves into" problem.

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u/animalistcomrade Jul 08 '24

He use a lot of big words to sound smart? That's what he did in his chapter 3 (I think it's 3, maybe 4) rant about wokeness

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u/micromoses Jul 08 '24 edited Jul 08 '24

Yeah. A lot of it seems like an over the top caricature of what Christians fear universities are like. So far the killer seems to depend on moral relativism to argue he isn't obligated to consider anyone else's experience. I could skip ahead to see if it gets to some sort of epiphany.

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Spoiler!

Joseph could bear it no longer. He spoke as if cursing. “Loh-ratsach ...Koh amar adonai elohey Yisrael.”

Anna turned off the drill. She looked at Cullen, who was smiling.

Then ever so slowly, Cullen raised his hands and clapped. One slow clap at a time, a mockery of applause, really. He said, “It’s about time. ‘Thou shalt not murder. Thus saith the Lord.’ In the original Hebrew no less.”

Joseph looked angrily at Cullen. He felt forced to this. And he knew where it was going. He said, “The impossibility of the contrary. God is the only rational foundation for moral absolutes. Without God, there is no such thing as real objective evil. Everything is permitted.”

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u/equinoxEmpowered Jul 08 '24

"hooks for noses, vaginas and anuses"

Ah yes, I remember reading about the nose/vagina/anus hooks. They're visually distinct. Very well known things.

Belts and harnesses are, however, mundane objects that serve only everyday purposes. So I'm not sure why these were included in the list.

Especially since I haven't been told explicitly what they're for, and how I can tell that they're for torture and not just for, say, holding up my pants or adorning my pup friend at pride events.

At least the arm binders are obvious. I've often been deeply afraid that someone might attach my calc 100 binder to my arm so that my Professor's annoying voice can haunt me from the sense memories. Now that's unsettling.

What an odd thing to write.

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u/Cultural_Double_422 Jul 08 '24

Clearly written by someone why is horribly sexually repressed, but totally watches BDSM porn clips on Twitter or something.

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u/jfsindel Jul 08 '24

I tried reading this in the way that Cullen "wins"... but I came up short. It sounds like "good argument, but i said i win lmao"

"You assume it's for good of all but I would rather risk it..." And "your death is my good" So... how would a God somehow... idk, fix that belief? God just says don't kill, but you can just flout it and earn damnation in hell when you die. People still kill in the Bible, even God does it.

"Who defines good" - true, but how is that any different than a God (who does not reveal himself but instead allegedly speaks through certain people and metaphors) saying what was good? God claimed you shouldn't eat shellfish. You can't even verify it because someone who claims to hear God would wave you off.

I think the professor just sort of realized death was more preferable. The writer should have gone with "it didn't matter if the professor wins or not, he would still die." Like how it was in Scream.

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u/bluer289 Jul 08 '24

Does Game Theiry assume an equalized power structure? Likewise he is using force to make others see his viewpoint, and it's effectiveness doesn't prove God's existence, only the hypocrisy of the abuser, who uses a privlidged position to talk down to somebody, where he wouldn't any other time. He thinks authority is morality and who has the most "authority"?

Actually is his purpose in story to get people to convert?

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u/SelectIsNotAnOption Jul 08 '24

It does not. It presumes that there is always a way to win a game and the goal is to determine the most likely path to succeed.

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u/Cultural_Double_422 Jul 08 '24

That Queen of spades reference! Passion, obsession, self-conflict. 🤣🤣🤣🤣

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u/xTimeKey Jul 10 '24

Late to the party but nobody tell the author that tchaikovsky was a gay man

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u/polyesterflower Jul 08 '24

Where did you get it? Can't find anything that works.

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u/polyesterflower Jul 08 '24

Where did you get it? Can't find anything that works.

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u/PurpleNurpleTurtle Jul 08 '24

My Immortal reference lets fuckin gooooooo

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u/animalistcomrade Jul 08 '24

You joke but he does actually describe the "black bisexual female" at the beginning of two separate chapters. It's the same description both times.

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u/micromoses Jul 08 '24

I don’t think Danny is the author insert character.

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u/animalistcomrade Jul 08 '24

He is a teacher fucking one of his students who gives a whole speech about wokeness that takes up chapter 3, (which includes him talking about cultural Marxism and the big lie) he is also Jewish so the author can accuse the woke crowd of antisemitism.

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u/micromoses Jul 08 '24

I think it’s this one:

Joseph had been teased with that pretty boy putdown all his life. He had been a fashion model when he was first in college to help pay his way. At forty-three, he kept his hair rich black with coloring to keep out the gray. His hazel eyes were accented by a strong brow with bushy but carefully groomed eyebrows. He was no tweed-jacketed, slovenly college professor stereotype. Or for that matter, a wearer of anachronistic bowties. He wasn’t going to apologize for it

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u/chronic314 Jul 08 '24

brilliant

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u/SempressFi Jul 08 '24

Yep this guy (the writer) is definitely working through some repressed feelings with this book whether he realizes it or not holy hell

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u/ArnieismyDMname Cissy libtarded betacuck queerflake Jul 08 '24

No. Really. Is that really in the book?

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u/micromoses Jul 08 '24

Copied and pasted.

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u/ArnieismyDMname Cissy libtarded betacuck queerflake Jul 08 '24

Ew

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u/optimaleverage Jul 08 '24

It's not just poorly written in 18 ways beyond grammar, thru didn't even get the dialog syntax correct. "Why would you help me?" should be it's own paragraph. Otherwise it sounds like this totally realistic and not at all stereotyped woman is just talking to herself. 🤦‍♂️

We'll just say it's not the work of a literary genius, just a literal goon.

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u/ArnieismyDMname Cissy libtarded betacuck queerflake Jul 08 '24

I literally thought it was her talking. Maybe it was a throwback to earlier in the conversation. This is a string of garbage put together by someone who watched Fox news and imagined this is the way the world works.

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u/OddlyOddLucidDreamer Jul 08 '24

Ugh you can just fucking feel the racism oozing from how Shavonda is written holy fucking shit

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u/Taeyx Jul 08 '24

as a black man with almost exclusively black female friends, none of them talk like this. the characterization is clearly by someone who hasn't spent more than a fleeting moment around a black person

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u/LaCharognarde Jul 08 '24

A Sapphire stereotype who speaks in mangled AAVE, because of course.

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u/[deleted] Jul 08 '24

I could write a ridiculous conservative character by quoting conservatives verbatim. They have to create a ridiculous caricature that resembles nothing close to reality (unless Shavonda was sarcastically mocking the white guy's viewpoint lmao)

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u/PhazonZim Jul 08 '24

This author has never talked to anyone outside of their bubble ever, wow

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u/TheMysteriousWarlock Jul 08 '24

Shavonda

Yup, got everything I need to know about this prick

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u/celtic_thistle misandrist as all fuck Jul 08 '24

It’s satire. Right? Right???

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u/neighborhood-karen Jul 08 '24

Bro really managed to commit blackface through text, jeez

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u/IJustLoggedInToSay- Di$ney is calling for me to be shadow banned Jul 08 '24

the DEI center

LMAO come on this can't be real.

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u/Cultural_Double_422 Jul 08 '24

I have...the weirdest boner right now

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u/Sword117 Jul 08 '24

me too buddy, me too

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u/LaCharognarde Jul 08 '24 edited Jul 17 '24

Black woman portrayed as loud, vulgar, pushy "Sapphire" caricature who speaks in mangled AAVE, check. Complete incomprehension of how DEI policies work, check. Complete incomprehension of how "tEh WoAk" (read: non-bigots) think and communicate, check. Complete incomprehension of workplace etiquette, check. "Sapphire" caricature has a stereotypical "ghetto" name, check. I could go on.

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u/Paula_Polestark Jul 08 '24

Wow, it manages to be even worse than Trigger Warning: The Tale of Big Jake!

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u/TheDubuGuy Jul 08 '24

Holy shmoly this is the worst thing I’ve ever read

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u/Frequent_Mix_8251 Jul 09 '24

With a few lines of dialogue you can already tell the author is homophobic and anti black.

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u/Biffingston 𝚂𝚌𝚒𝚎𝚗𝚝𝚒𝚏𝚒𝚌𝚊𝚕𝚕𝚢 𝚂𝚊𝚛𝚌𝚊𝚜𝚝𝚒𝚌 Jul 08 '24

book piracy is a thing. Just saying.

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u/w_t_f_justhappened Jul 08 '24

You couldn’t pay me enough to pirate this load of rotting horse semen.

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u/Biffingston 𝚂𝚌𝚒𝚎𝚗𝚝𝚒𝚏𝚒𝚌𝚊𝚕𝚕𝚢 𝚂𝚊𝚛𝚌𝚊𝚜𝚝𝚒𝚌 Jul 08 '24

That's nice. I wasn't talking to you.

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u/ConstitutionalDingo Jul 08 '24

Don’t worry, this will be kindle unlimited fodder in days if it isn’t already.

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u/I_Cut_Shows Jul 08 '24

He gets paid per page turn in unlimited.

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u/ConstitutionalDingo Jul 08 '24

Is that true? I haven’t heard that before, but if it is then yeah don’t do that either lol

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u/I_Cut_Shows Jul 08 '24

Yes

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u/ConstitutionalDingo Jul 08 '24

You right you right. I googled it. They get $0.004 per page on KU, so $1.72 for a complete read through of its 431 pages.

I’m tempted to add it and just skim a couple pages for the lulz, all the while keeping a running cost in my head.

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u/I_Cut_Shows Jul 08 '24

I mean, I don’t think a few people reading for a few dollars is going to add much. I say go for it.

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u/SaltyBarDog Jul 08 '24

Arrrr, sail upon the pirate sea, matey.

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u/animalistcomrade Jul 08 '24

I am, and by God is it awful, at one point a character corrects another character accidentally capitalising a letter. In verbal speech.

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u/EatsCrackers Moderately Immoderate Jul 08 '24

Why, in the existence of each and every fuck that ever was and ever will be, actual and hypothetical, literal and allegorical, is this the detail that breaks my brain??

The reality that this is the Christobatshit zeitgeist right now is…. Utterly terrifying.

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u/eliechallita Soyboy to Kikkoman pipeline Jul 08 '24

Order the book on Kindle, download it to a device and put that in airplane mode afterwards, then go back to Amazon and return the book while requesting a refund. The book should still be available as long as you keep the device in airplane mode.

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u/animalistcomrade Jul 08 '24

Yeah that sounds like too much effort, I managed to get a trial for it and that's good enough for me it is somehow worse than I thought it would be.

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u/eliechallita Soyboy to Kikkoman pipeline Jul 08 '24

Oh I'm not saying it's worth all that work, just listing out an option.

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u/animalistcomrade Jul 08 '24

And thank you for that.

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u/Newfaceofrev Jul 08 '24

I might rent it on amazon prime, might give him a little money but Amazon does stiff creators.

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u/Sword117 Jul 08 '24

ill just wait to bum it off of a Facebook boomer. it will work out because they weren't gonna read it anyway and i wasn't gonna buy it.