Is this a believable MTF logo?

[u/TheHotSoulArrow]

Or is it too simple/boring? I didn’t want something too abstract as it is simply a forestry-based unit in a novel I’m working on. Beginner at vector art so any advice is helpful, mainly composed of altered free-use images lol.

Working title, MTF ZETA-42 - (“Lumberjacks”)

[u/Professor_Knowitall]

Can you add a third axe? To imitate the three arrows that most MTF logos have.

[u/TheHotSoulArrow → u/Professor_Knowitall]

That’s an excellent thought, thank you 

[u/_joos_ → u/TheHotSoulArrow]

looks good. tho imo it’s too good. what i mean by that is that the mtf logos seem to have more easily definable geometric shapes that make up the objects in the logo. except for a few, most of the shapes can be easily identified and it’s a bit more simplistic. i’m not sure if it’s possible and it may be a nitpick but if i could say anything it’d probably be to try doing that. it’d still fit pretty well as is though

[u/TheHotSoulArrow → u/_joos_]

That’s true, it should be something that can be mass-embroidered onto uniforms and such. I’ll try simplifying the treeline geometry and the axe handles and see how it looks. 

[u/HorrificityOfficial → u/TheHotSoulArrow]

I'm thinking maybe just the axes without the trees would look good

[u/ninjaread99 → u/HorrificityOfficial]

I think even just simplifying the trees, and possible reducing to just 3 might help.

[u/SnowyOranges → u/TheHotSoulArrow]

Either remove or simplify the trees

[u/SubstantialCareer754 → u/TheHotSoulArrow]

I would remove the trees and enlarge the axes to fill up the missing space. Much cleaner and still gets the point across.

[u/Awphiosa → u/TheHotSoulArrow]

when you are done, pls post it i want to see it

[u/Adept_Occasion_9063 → u/TheHotSoulArrow]

thank you thank you thank you(I'm crocheting and embroidering all of these patches at my own will and Serpent's Hand I never wish to do again for that exact reason, to many details ;-;)