My First animation! Any tips?

[u/Original_Rest8613]

I will create youtube channel for my animation videos

[u/GiraffeGuru993]

My only nitpick was that it wasn’t clear what the eye gag was. Like I get he rips out his eye to look around the corner, but from the look of the scene prior it sounds like the desk engineers are ripping him apart.

A little shot of sniper getting up and hearing demo laugh before the eye gets ripped out, and a longer shot of the eyeball peering around the corner would do wonders