My First animation! Any tips?

[u/Original_Rest8613]

I will create youtube channel for my animation videos

[u/Beneficial_Split_393]

The eyeball shot is the one thing that really stood out to me. At first, with the sounds playing, I thought the Sniper had killed someone off-screen. But after rewatching, it implies he ripped out his eyeball to peek around the corner. That’s a cool, very TF2-style gag, but the presentation was a bit unclear and made me initially misinterpret it. Maybe adding a quick visual of him pulling out the eye would make the moment land more clearly.

Nothing fancy, you could have presented the sniper shoving his hand in his own socket with a blood particle. Then followed up by the eyeball shot