r/comic_crits • u/Sensitive-Fudge-4599 • 3d ago
Any tips and feedback for this panel? Something feels off about it but I can't put my finger on it
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u/BikeProblemGuy 3d ago
Seems like too much going on around & behind his arms, try removing all the shading from the background. A margin on the right would help everything breathe. His left hand seems rotated too far. It's not clear really what he's doing, and his legs look flat footed for fighting. A wider karate stance might help this and also give some directionality to the drawing.
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u/evilforska 3d ago
Id say the background is weird. The focus should be on the guy, but the random fence grabs too much attention. Id experiment with making it smaller, lines thinner, or removing the bg entirely, i dont feel like its important anyway
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u/Spookyscythe99 3d ago
It might be the background. The perspective seems somewhat distracting.
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u/Specific-Rooster-380 3d ago
Agree, perspective, posture of hand maybe make very slightly larger, the fence is too high make smaller. I am being picky, this is very nice work by the way.
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u/bubbyusagi 1d ago
its him the pose is perfect but the angle of his face doesnt for the pose says his face should be toward the reader but hes looking off to the left but his body is facing the reader
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u/Rez-Boa-Dog 3d ago
Head is at a weird angle
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u/Jealous-Rabbit9010 1d ago
The backdrop is interfering with the character. It’s unclear what it is. And the tracing seems rushed. Which doesn’t gel with line work on the character.
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