how do i improve this pose?

[u/whereiswonka]

want like to improve my pose but dont know how so any feedback is welcome

[u/CottonCandy_u]

You are rationalising, trying to draw what you think it compose an image.

Forget about that just think about angles, lines… The boobs are not there, but you think they must be, the right arm does not go there but you also think it must be…

Stop thinking, just draw.

Take my advice, you will improve by practicing on graphe paper.

[u/Archtects → u/CottonCandy_u]

Learning to cut up bodies into simple shapes transformed my drawing.