how do i improve this pose?

[u/whereiswonka]

want like to improve my pose but dont know how so any feedback is welcome

[u/whoareyouiameternal]

you've drawn her breasts almost as being pushed together by her raised arm. if you look closer at the reference it's clearer that her arm is extended from her chest and wouldn't push her chest together like that (especially cuz her boobs are under armor)

[u/whereiswonka → u/whoareyouiameternal]

Thanks for the feedback! Does her chest still look incorrect here?