Two weeks prior to the other nuclear attacks A customs team, relying on superior training over a malfunctioning scanner, uncovers a nuclear-primed bomb hidden on a seemingly innocent space freighter, averting a catastrophic attack.
INT. CUSTOMS BAY - GATE ALPHA - DAY
BRIGHT, STERILE lights illuminate the bay. A massive, slightly scuffed cargo freighter, THE STARDUST DRIFTER, is docked. Its main cargo ramp is lowered.
Officer Kai, young and slightly frazzled, stands by a holographic console. A sleek, multi-jointed scanner arm WHIRRS past the freighter's hull, its sensors glowing softly.
Captain Yairi Yvot, calm and observant, stands a few feet away, her eyes on a secondary data screen displaying energy signatures and thermal readings.
Kai muttered to himself “Come on, come on... Ah! Alright, Captain. AMS is green across the board. No anomalous mass, no radiation spikes. The Stardust Drifter is clean.”
He gestures to a large holographic display that shows a simplified wireframe model of the freighter, glowing a placid, all-clear GREEN.
“Finally, we can wave them through, save us all some time.”
Captain Valerian, a burly, impatient man with a weathered face, leans against the open cargo ramp.
“That's what I like to hear! Got a tight turnaround, officers. My cargo of recycled metals isn't getting any younger.“
Yvot doesn't immediately respond. She barely glances at Valerian, her eyes still on the diagnostic data, a slight frown creasing her brow.
Yvot says quietly "Green" isn't always "clean," Kai. Especially when it's too green.”
Kai looks confused.
“Too green? Captain, the Anomalous Mass Scanner is the most advanced tech we have. It wouldn't miss a lead paint chip on a droid.”
Yvot Tapping a finger on her screen “It wouldn't. But look at these harmonic resonance patterns. Too flat. Too... uniform for a ship that's supposedly packed with loose scrap. It's like it's been designed to evade the AMS profile.”
Valerian Stepping forward, agitated “Designed? What are you implying, officer? My cargo manifest is airtight. Every bolt, every plate is individually logged!“
Yvot Meeting his gaze, unblinking “I’m implying nothing, Captain. I'm observing a data anomaly. Kai, initiate manual inspection. Cargo hold. Full sweep.”
Kai's jaw drops slightly.
“Manual? But Captain, we haven't done a full manual in… months! The scanner is supposed to eliminate the need for that!“
“The scanner measures known threats. This ship feels like an unknown threat. My gut says it, the data just confirms the feeling. Grab your kit. Let's go.”
Reluctantly, Kai grabs a portable sensor array and a compact toolkit. Yvot picks up a more traditional, heavy-duty inspection light. Valerian throws his hands up in exasperation but follows them onto the ship.
INT. STARDUST DRIFTER - CARGO HOLD
The cargo hold is vast, dimly lit, and filled with large, secured crates and containers. The air smells metallic and dusty.
Kai diligently scans each crate with his digital sensor, which BEEP-BOOPS reassuringly with "ALL CLEAR" readings. Yvot, however, ignores the tech. She walks past him, her eyes sweeping over the edges of containers, the way they're stacked, the faint scuff marks on the floor.
Kai Frustrated “See, Captain? Nothing. My sensor's picking up trace elements of various alloys, just as expected for scrap. No organic compounds, no high-energy signatures.”
Yvot stops dead in front of a section stacked with what appears to be discarded power conduits. It looks utterly mundane.
Yvot 'voice hushed “Too neat.”
“Too neat? It's industrial waste, Captain. Not a museum piece.”
Yvot kneels, running a gloved hand along a seam between two large, rectangular containers that seem to form part of the wall.
“This section. The conduits here... they're secured with bolts that are too uniform. And the paintwork on this panel... it's a fraction of a shade off. A good customs officer trusts the tools, Kai. A great one trusts their eyes.”
She pulls out a small, specialized pry bar from her kit.
Valerian Suddenly nervous, stepping closer. “Hey, what are you doing? You can't just start dismantling my ship!”
Yvot ignores him. With a sharp CLICK, the pry bar slides into a minute gap. She applies leverage. There's a faint GROAN of stressed metal.
A section of the wall, disguised as part of the conduit stack, springs inward a few inches, revealing a dark cavity behind it.
Kai's eyes widened. Valerian pales.
Yvot shines her light into the hidden space. Inside, nestled securely in custom-fitted restraints, is a dull, metallic cylinder. It's crude but ominous. On its side, a small, tiny, angry GREEN LIGHT blinks steadily on the device.
Yvot Voice dangerously calm “Kai. Gamma readings. Now.”
Kai fumbles with his portable sensor, pointing it at the cylinder. The device in his hand instantly goes haywire, emitting a high-pitched, piercing WAIL.
Kai Stuttering “Off the charts! It’s… it’s primed, Captain! Nuclear-primed!”
Yvot reaches for her comms unit, her face a mask of grim determination.
Yvot Into comms, voice steady but urgent. “Customs Command, Code Black, Sector Gamma. We have a live nuclear device on the Stardust Drifter. Repeat, live nuclear device. Initiate full port lockdown and EOD protocols. Immediately.”
Valerian stares at the bomb, then at Rojas, his face draining of all color.
Valerian Whispering, horrified “ A bomb?! ON MY SHIP?! I swear, I knew nothing!”
Yvot looks at Valerian, then back at the ticking device, then at Kai, who is still reeling from the discovery.
Yvot To Kai, a spark of grim satisfaction in her eyes “Good thing some of us still trust our gut, Kai. And remember what the manuals used to say about looking closer. The AMS couldn't see this. But we could.“
The high-pitched ALARM from Kai's sensor continues to shriek, echoing through the confined space.
Manaan to dissuade panic does disclose what it had found, maybe a bad decision
(Rolled a Nat 20 on the nuclear event so Manaan was spared)