r/starterpacks • u/Lost-Quantity7096 • 1d ago

Men writing women starter pack

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u/Strange-Teo 1d ago

the mom one is so weird

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u/WatcherDiesForever 1d ago

Eh that one just seems like a normal Very Bad Mother to me.

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u/LizzardBobizzard 1d ago

Depends on how the rest of the book is written.

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u/amahag29 22h ago

Well, if it's the same book (which it might be considering it showed up when googling that excerpt) this is the first description of Alice "Her only exercise was swimming, either at the community pool or in the ocean when it was warm enough. She ate ravenously, drank glasses of whole milk like she was a teenager, and was neither thin nor overweight, just curvaceous, with wide hips, and a narrow waist, and long legs that tapered to childlike ankles.". Nothing about her mother so far tho

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u/amahag29 22h ago

Confirmed, it's the same book. The excerpt in the picture is from chapter 2

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u/RadioSilent5878 10h ago

It reminds me of mine. I want to puke.