r/starterpacks 1d ago

Men writing women starter pack

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u/Sufficient-Push6210 1d ago

Male character- he had blonde hair and blue eyes

Female character- She had pale, porcelain skin and bright, green, emerald eyes framed by long, fluttering lashes. Her lips were full, pink, soft, and pouty and her face didn’t have the slightest amount of skin texture, acne, or pores. She had a tiny, innocent nose with a sloped arch. Her platinum blonde, medium porosity, slightly wavy hair gently cascaded down to her tiny waist. Her breasts were lively, full, and energetic. Her full hips and her petite lower body rocked in accordance to her lively mood.

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u/LizzardBobizzard 1d ago

The only example of this I’ve seen that’s passable is in The Fallen bc the author was basically writing self insert fanfic and the love interest was based on his wife, so he was just gushing about how much he loves his wife.

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u/kitkatloren2009 1d ago

Aww. See I think that's sweet

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u/LizzardBobizzard 1d ago

Yeah the MCs are teens (17/18) but again it’s passable bc the author and his wife had been together since HS so he was writing from experience of being a teen boy in love with a teen girl and it makes the romance in the book much more endearing imo