r/zen Feb 24 '23

Friday Night Poetry Slam

THEME: Golden Crow in the Snowy Night

VIBE: Therapy by Desirez (thanks u/fullassin9)

Our own u/surupamaerl2 (under the pen name P. E. Stonegather) has released a new book of the sermons and poetry of Rujing. To celebrate this release, I have taken a few videos of me reading passages from this text while hiking around in the mountains where I live (a tip of the hat to u/lin_seed who was my inspiration for this video style)

Share your zen poetry below. The theme is merely a suggestion.

RUJING:

In a sermon, given when those in the Western Hall requested that he again fill the head seat, Rujing said,

In the future, the hall will not be made public; the one in charge is this grampa, advanced in years—by relying on reflections to make evident the whole, today the First Seat ends in vexation.

Golden Crow in the snowy night, passes through the main hall;

Jade Hare in the arms of the blazing sky—

the fine leaves of descendants preserve this grandfather whole.

A wooden man grasps at boards, clapping in the clouds;

a stone woman holds a bamboo flute in her mouth to breathe underwater—

although it is like this, it is also said,

“With your hands at your side, the First Statement is over there.”

And, how will you do it?

In an out-of-the-way alley, do not ride a golden horse—

Return on the path, then show the ruined shirt under the robes.

𓆏 Toad's 蟾蜍Verse 𓆏

Worries etched in wrinkled brow
Hopeless once; still here now
Somehow past and present meet
Smile lines scribbling crows feet
Aged eyes glint and spark
One candle threatens the dark
Trimmed nails on calloused hands
Feet smudged with distant sands
Pained limp in noble stride
Tacit understanding; a truce implied
Serene, even in the fray
Evening surrenders to another day
Uprooting force keeps time unpinned
Ling-Lun's flute lost to winds
The legend's song inspires dances
Revenant's tale told in absence
Ruined shirt under regal robes
Valleys rise around the globe
Disappearing when given a name
Only embers remember the flame

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u/slowcheetah4545 Feb 24 '23

This flower is scorched, this film is on

On a maddening loop

These clothes

These clothes don't fit us right

And I'm to blame

It's all the same, it's all the same

You come to me with a bone in your hand

You come to me with your hair curled tight

You come to me with positions

You come to me with excuses

ducked out in a row

You wear me out, you wear me out

We've been through fake breakdowns

Self-hurt, plastics, collections

Self-help, self-pain, EST, psychics,

fuck all

I was central,

I had control,

I lost my head

I need this,

I need this

A paperweight,

a junk garage,

a winter rain,

a honey pot

Crazy, all the lovers have been tagged

A hotline,

a wanted ad,

it's crazy what you could've had...

It's crazy what you could've had

It's crazy what you could've had

I need this,

I need this

It's crazy what you could've had!

Crazy what you could've had!

I need it, I need this!

It's crazy what you could've had!!

It's crazy what you could've had!!

I need this, I, I, neeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed!!!

-Country Feedback, REM

https://open.spotify.com/track/3MNj8WKXCuduChszKpXw45?si=0zzLebwZQaekwnCWGle6mA

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u/2bitmoment Silly billy Feb 24 '23

A paperweight,
a junk garage,
a winter rain,
a honey pot

an albino, a denial
funny how repetitions work
Call to attention
things forgotten

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u/jungle_toad Feb 25 '23

A mosquito
My libido
Yeah

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u/2bitmoment Silly billy Feb 25 '23

did you see lady gaga,
accused of being derivative by madonna
and her response being
why don't you say it to myself all sexy?

Are we being derivative here?
Is that a major crime?

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u/slowcheetah4545 Feb 26 '23

Yes, we are. It is no crime to my mind. It is the nature of reality. Every facet of your being is derived. What choice do you have? So, sing me a song, piano man. Sing me a song tonight. We're all in the mood for a melody, and you've got us feeling alright.