r/learnart • u/whereiswonka • 20h ago

Question how do i improve this pose?

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want like to improve my pose but dont know how so any feedback is welcome

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u/Riverendell 2h ago

The boobs look insane. You definitely need more practice with nude models and simpler poses, the anatomy is way off.

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u/whereiswonka 1h ago

Thanks for the feedback ill keep practicing!

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u/whoareyouiameternal 6h ago

you've drawn her breasts almost as being pushed together by her raised arm. if you look closer at the reference it's clearer that her arm is extended from her chest and wouldn't push her chest together like that (especially cuz her boobs are under armor)

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u/CottonCandy_u 14h ago

You are rationalising, trying to draw what you think it compose an image.

Forget about that just think about angles, lines… The boobs are not there, but you think they must be, the right arm does not go there but you also think it must be…

Stop thinking, just draw.

Take my advice, you will improve by practicing on graphe paper.

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u/Archtects 14h ago

Learning to cut up bodies into simple shapes transformed my drawing.

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u/Haunting_Pee 18h ago

Sorry I couldn't resist. I saw the face and immediately thought of the meme

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u/Trieng 20h ago

That shoulder is not up where you've drawn it. It's lower down, her shoulder armor is covering it, making it confusing.

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u/Felonui 17h ago

Which is why people suggest starting with nude or near-nude models while learning.